Lost forever

Losing... 
Finally understand i lost a friend... 
Not just a friend... 
She was half my world... 
Knowing shes gone is like an aching pain in my mind and heart...
Shes gone... 
Not to return...
Gone eith her new friends...
Making and setting new goalss...
While leaving me and past memories behind... 
Gone...
Not to return to say hello or goodbye...
Its my fault...
I should have tried harder...
Shouldnt have let her go so easily...
Maybe i thought it was best...
For her to go... 
To leave me in the shadows...
Only to realize its me whos crying... 
Me whos aching...
Me who knows...
She wont be mine again....

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Despite the couple spelling errors, this piece was enjoyable. It expressed pain that a good many of us feel once or more in our hearts. Good job. Keep it up!