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A Poem by Danny Sanchez

The sound
Of your voice
Inebriates
My thoughts;
My heart;
And even my walk
...
I had to check into rehab last night;
Detox was my last hope;
This love
Addiction
I can't cope
It's stronger than;
Man's greed for wealth
A daily struggle
But I'd do it all over again
Just to hear
That unconvincing,
Raspy;
Yet strong voice
Whisper "I love you"
Such a sweet and beautiful noise

© 2013 Danny Sanchez


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Check into a Love Rehab! I feel the pain here. Great metaphor. Love the originality, rhythm and flow. Brava!

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Added on May 3, 2013
Last Updated on May 3, 2013
Tags: poetry, love, longing, voice, life, rehab

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Danny Sanchez
Danny Sanchez

Baltimore, MD



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