Do You Even Care?

Do You Even Care?

A Poem by coma black☯

I get that you're depressed.
It's kind of hard not to be depressed actually.
Everyone is cruel.
Humans are awful. 
No one understands you.
But why would you do that?
Why would you slit your wrists with your f*****g
razor that you haven't looked at in months?
Why would you break all of our promises?
Why would you throw away my feelings,
my love for you?
Why do you do this?
Why?

© 2012 coma black☯


Author's Note

coma black☯
Idk...

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Deep. The image in line 8 is so frightening that I wonder if the poem would be even more shocking if you started it with this image. Just a suggestion. Good Work

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People call me Amber. I'm 16. I listen to Pierce The Veil. I hate boys. Yeah that's pretty much it. more..

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