Who Are You Now?

You used to be able to smile.

You used to be so good at pretending.

But now you're just so weak.

You're crumbling down like

how you've always feared. 

The razor is pressed up against your

wrists again.

And now you're just so pathetic.

You became the girl you used to be.

You're worse than anyone else.

You should just end your life right now. 

Reviews

[Forevermore]

its pretty deep, but its how some ppl feel. great write

[VannahBanana]

This poem shows a lot about yourself. I think, taking a step back from everything and just thinking about the things to be thankful for doesn't always help. It rarely helps.
I think this poem shows the darkness of the planet. How it's not always such a beautiful place, and it won't always be the one we thought it'd be so many years ago. Good write. I hope things get better.

[LoveYourself]

Really, I agree with Gus. The depth of the poem really shows how you're feeling and it's clear you're going through a tough patch in your life. Ignore the a*****e everyone hates and just focus on the people who lift you up. Don't let anyone bring you down and focus on positive things. Life is a f*****g battle, but it's when it's all over and all that's left are the remains of what we have conquered, there's a sweet victory. (cheesy i know, but that's just what came to mind and it made sense.) I hope you get better soon and solve whatever problem you are dealing with.
-Missy
P.S. Loved the poem. :]