The Boy Who Lived On The Corner Of 2nd And 3rd Street.

Once there was a boy.

He lived on the corner of 2nd and 3rd street,

with his mother,

and his pet dog.

He went to school with a girl.

And they became friends.

Once there was a boy.

He lived on the corner of 2nd and 3rd street,

with his mother,

his step father,

and his pet dog.

He went to school with a girl.

And they stopped talking. 

Once there was a boy.

He hating living on the corner of 2nd and 3rd street,

with his mother. 

He went to school with a girl.

They started talking again.

Once there was a boy.

He lived on the corner of 4th and 5th street,

with his mother.

He went to school with a girl.

They started dating.

Once there was a boy.

He lived wherever there was room for him to sleep,

with whoever he could find. 

He went to school with a girl.

They hated each other. 

Reviews

[Brandon]

I love the simplicity of it. It's like telling a story using Norman Rockwell characters. The story it tells, the ups and downs, all very vividly concise. Really great write =)

[hmm]

Wow, i love this write, very descriptive and has wonderful imagery.
So nicely written...love the feel of the write. Awesome job!