I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by coma black☯

The tears stream down my face again,
as I sink to the floor.
The way you left was awful.
You disappeared off of the face of the earth.
Who you are now is a mystery. 
I'm sorry for what I said. 
I'm sorry I wasn't the best choice for you. 
The razors go across my arms again,
as I fall into bed. 
The way I treated you was awful.
I want to disappear off of the face of the earth.
What I feel for you now is a mystery.
I'm sorry for everything. 
I'm sorry I'm doing this right now.
I'm sorry for breaking your promises. 

© 2012 coma black☯


Author's Note

coma black☯
Yeah this is kind of bad but whatever

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its a good play on words
its sad yet apologetic(:

xoxo
~a
100.100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your ink is made of emotion, love. This is great. Cheers. -gregory

Posted 12 Years Ago


I dont think its bad. It sounds full of emotion, energy, and honesty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmm
No not bad at all, I like it,
It's sad and well expressed.
quite an enjoyable read, the emotions are there.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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