Giving Up.

A Poem by coma black☯

This is it.

After 10 years of your bull s**t,

I can't take it anymore.

Your mood swings.

Your suicide attempts.

Your drug addictions.

Your love for danger.

Your carelessness.

Your sensitivity.

Your anger.

Your depression.

I can't deal with it anymore.

We aren't kids anymore,

and we need to move on.

© 2012 coma black☯

Author's Note

If you leave any reviews saying "oh reconsider your decisions" and stuff like that, I will delete them.

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ATG

A very well written and personal poem about someone. You left just enough information out that it doesn't show who the poem is really about which is good. Overall, a good poem.

As for the subject matter, I will say this. Sometimes, it is just healthier to move on from someone who is having severe problems mentally and isn't recovering. It can be unhealthy sticking with someone like that if you don't love them already. I remember having to push away a friend of mine who had problems. I didn't want to, but I had to because she was becoming toxic to my mental health. So in short, you are making the right decision. This is of course assuming the poem is persoanl.