Help You

Help You

A Poem by coma black☯

I wanna help you just like
how you helped me. 
But sometimes I think it's
hard for me to breathe. 
I wanna run to you and ask you where
you disappeared to. 
I wanna run away from you and never come back. 
You're another stranger, another ghost. 
You become everything I hate now. 
I would like it if everything was fine,
so we could stop pretending and
playing these scenes over and over again
in our minds. 

© 2011 coma black☯


Author's Note

coma black☯
Bad but yeah

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I really liked this. Great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Repetition of bad scenes leave us wishing for a better place. I like the tale and the logical ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I thought it was great, keep it up Amber!

-Oliver Crane-

Posted 12 Years Ago


This isn't bad. I thought it was good! Thanks for sharing :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2011
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coma black☯
coma black☯

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People call me Amber. I'm 16. I listen to Pierce The Veil. I hate boys. Yeah that's pretty much it. more..

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