Love

Love

A Poem by Ivychelle
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What Is Love

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Love is,
Sparkling like a shining stars,
Gloomy as a passing grey clouds,
Raining hardly with droplets of raindrops above,
and the sun rise brightly in the morning.

© 2014 Ivychelle


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Simple, direct, lovely imagery.

I think your title more aptly should be "Love Is…" and that the poem should begin and end with the line "Love is… "

In the last line, did you mean "… sun [rising] brightly… " or, perhaps [shining]?

Posted 10 Years Ago


MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You express feelings beautiful. All else is finesse and that's a matter of your sensibility, not min.. read more
Ivychelle

10 Years Ago

yup,thank you for your time by reading my writing :-)
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Ivychelle
Ivychelle

Sarawak, Kuching, Malaysia



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