Superman

Superman

A Poem by iveltac

Superman


Superman is super and duper.


He has no bloopers and is definitely not a mini cupper.


He fly’s through the air with the greatest of ease until he meets a good winter breeze.


It then freezes him and makes him sneeze.


When he sneezes the world gets the mizzles.

© 2015 iveltac


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This piece is super dooper. Its hilarious love it.


Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

Thanks Kristan.
A fun write. I bet you were smiling ALL the way.
Thank you for sharing your wit and charm.
Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing.
random... I like it. hahaha:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

Totaly agree with you.
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

I don't know what is the purpose of it, sometimes I only want to say: thanks. sometimes one word say.. read more
iveltac

9 Years Ago

Same here.
lol i really liked this. great job. ill never see superman the same again

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

:p thanks. im glad you liked it. I thought it was one of the worst of my poems. Didn't put much time.. read more
this was fun
lol


I like the randomness of it


-Dream

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

Lol randomness is what i do best.
this made me laugh soo hard lol, we srsly need more content like this on here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

;p thanks Kaif. I love it when people laugh at my stuff. Thats what i write it for to make people la.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Superman or better said stupidman hits me in the stomach... I look at him like nothing happened... T.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Oops..missed the review... Sorry.
Ohhhh.....GROSS. That was such a clear picture in my head. Like...snot just raining down on earth. Ugghghghghghghghgh...gotta get that picture out of my head or I'll never go out in the rain again. =D

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

steven

9 Years Ago

sort of, i dont really follow the comics anymore, i have a few x men books though, btw do you know t.. read more
closed

9 Years Ago

i think so
it gets really confusing though
steven

9 Years Ago

yeah MCU censors too, quicksilver and scarlet witch "love" eachother too much (incestual sort of) an.. read more
Very very true.... :P ....

Posted 9 Years Ago


iveltac

9 Years Ago

:p..............
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

:p..................
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iveltac
iveltac

Middle Earth, KS



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