My thoughts and feelings

Jan. 21 '08

I just want to love

and to be loved

it is the unknown to me

lonliness is getting

the best of me

it seems im not myself

reading deeply into

simple things

complexing a matter

that means nothing to him

wrapping my mind

around a boy that

hides behind a curtain

secretly laughing at my words

i express the truth inside

the best i can

and still no response

Reviews

[Leah Maldonado]

hides behing a curtain
should be
hides behind a curtain


this is....absolutely beautiful....Its so simple and so...TRUE. its raw and heartfelt...so many people try to pull off the whole looking for love in such big cliches on here but this....it just worked..really well. Very good piece of writing in my opinion
Leah