Our last night

An image which appeared in my mind one night. Seems familiar to me. Maybe I've read or seen it somewhere before but it left an impression on me and I decided to jot it down. If you know where its from or something feel free to bash it and let me know

The nights were getting darker. Colder. The warmth of her touch was slowly fading. The love in her eyes had left long before this moment. The words escaping her mouth misconstrued what her heart was telling mine. Although my mind knew what was coming, my heart refused to believe any and all logic. All the foresight in the world wouldn't have helped prepare me for what the purpose of what this talk was. She was telling me that she was leaving but truth was that she had been gone for a while now. She hurried out. The words "good-bye" never got the chance to leave my lips. Instantly we are at the beach dancing in the moonlight, waves crashing at our feet. Her head on my shoulder, I tell her how much this moment means to me. I tell her that this memory will stay in my mind forever, and when I do think back on this moment a smile will always cross my face. The memory fades out as quickly as her car disappears behind the various buildings of our favorite haunt. The smile I promised years before is nowhere to be seen.

Reviews

[A.E Blink]

Nice. Its touching.