KISS

KISS

A Poem by itsjustme

this style is called diamante poetry. This style has seven lines each of which have a purpose:
line 1- noun or subject
line 2- 2 adjectives
line 3- 3 -ing words
line 4- 4 words about the subject
line 5- 3 -ing words
line 6- 2 adjectives
line 7- synonym/antonym of subject

most used s the fashion that you write about the first subject till the 3rd word on line four.  Then the second, synonym/antonym is expressed in the second portion.

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kiss

erotic, pleasent

smooching, amazing, heatening

tingle, haze, soft, ecstatic

exiteing, gazing, puffening

wet, warm

cry

© 2010 itsjustme


Author's Note

itsjustme
do you think i described the subjects well or poorly? Did you expect the word cry or was it a surprise? lol

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First, thanks for introducing this style of poetry. I've never heard of it but find it interesting and will give it shot. I think you described your subject perfectly and was surprised by the use of cry. Nice piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Different... in a good way. I've never seen this style before.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think the subjects are described well, cry was definitely a surprise haha! Love this, very clever!

- S.T.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2010
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my life as a poet started when i was a freshman in high school. there was this girl that i was going out with and i decided hey, girls like poetry ill write some. at first i rote only about her and .. more..

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