apocalyptica

it's apocalyptic
and there's no sunshine
just two black holes
it's here to stay
just two big black holes
and it's here to stay
no, never go away

its a crisis
so everybody run
just leave it be
it was bound to come
it's on its way
and there's no sunshine
no sunshine today

it's a gloomy night
and there's no day
times growing short
its all gonna fade
and it's pressing on
but man retreated today

it's apocalyptica
and its consuming everything
nothing stands in its way
so don't fight it
its inside you
and inside you its gonna stay
blinding your eyes
tearing your sunshine away

its gone mad
the worlds mad today
nothing can see
just 2 black holes
and its no surprise
no surprise that it came to be
its apocalyptica
and it's me

its apocalyptic
and there's no sunshine
just two black holes
its here to stay
just two big black holes
and its here to stay
no, never go away

Author's Note

should i take out the color? what do you think of my poem? criticize constructively if you like :)