Harmony

a harmony of a beautiful chaos & a harmony of a daunting pause

Author's Note

I wrote this for my creative writing class, let me know what you think and what I can improve on <3

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

V1 L4 .. i really like that .. smooth transition to the harmony of chaos, which, i think, is a deeply thought out concept ... there is no denying its existence .. the seeming purposelessness of natural destructive forces for instance .. beg the "Why?" ... when why the "Why?" is one much better to ask eh!? absolutely love your "....daunting pause" ... along with meditations on the sea .. mighty fine says i!
E.
ps. very small font ... can read only because of the contrast with color .. would really like larger font luv! ;))))))))))))))))

[mariposa]

Thank you so much!! Sadly, the website reduces the quality of the image but thank you for the reminder!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the paradox is wonderful in this piece, as is the alliteration.
a Storm of words, but devastatingly beautiful.
In the aftermath, we ask ourselves why all the forces of humankind cannot work together like those of nature.
j.

[mariposa]

Thank you so much!!