MONSTER! (RAWR!)

I was bored.. I had fun writing this one(: hehe

On those days you wake up

When your just in a bad mood

And you don't give a fu- what?

When you feel it within you

What will happen?

There's nothing you can do!

THERES A MONSTER COMING OUT!

Your family isn't alarmed

Yet all your neighbors scream and shout

And all of your friends

Know the drill

"Oh, its one of thooooose days? ..

What a thrill."

Stomping through the halls

People moving out of the way

Your friends look to each other and ask

"Dude, is he gonna be like this all day?"

Screaming at every little thing

When suddenly something changes

It's like a little ping

Why were you mad in the first place?

The whole day feels like a dream

Who did you hurt and what did you do?

Why do all these people suddenly resent you?

Oh well,

The day is over

As you say what you need to say

Your not the only one

Everyone has that day

Reviews

[Enigma]

Rawr back. Yes. What a brilliant poem. I having one such day and your poem has captured everything running through my mind. Those are the days when we don't care about anything else and keep wondering what is it that has made us so frighteningly mad. Haha. Great poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great poem with wonderful questioning that the reader feels involved in as they read. Keep writing :)