This song is kind of a mash up of my 2 favorite songs at the moment with a little twist added(:
One day too late & Never surrender- (Both by 'Skillet')
Idk about it being a song, it definitely is absent of a refrain, chorus, bridge, or other variants otherthan a single verse (possibly a type of free-verse, more closely to spokenword).
I did enjoy it though, not trying to be harsh if I come off as such. I'm with the circus nerd though, compared to your other stuff, it is an improvement and a congratulations is in order for that, so applauds to you mate, applauds to you. I hope to read more. love the meaning behind, to never give up even when times go tough, ya that's sum stuff mate. keep up the good work, research sum other poetry types to try (shadowpoetryDOTcom is a good place to start, or wikipedia) and work from there.
We use to do this when I was a teenager (circa 50's & 60's) with popular songs to construct what we called "raps" (not the hip hop rap). Generally, they were composed for girl friends. I enjoy this. Why do you italicize and underline? The words don't need that kind of help.
Idk about it being a song, it definitely is absent of a refrain, chorus, bridge, or other variants otherthan a single verse (possibly a type of free-verse, more closely to spokenword).
I did enjoy it though, not trying to be harsh if I come off as such. I'm with the circus nerd though, compared to your other stuff, it is an improvement and a congratulations is in order for that, so applauds to you mate, applauds to you. I hope to read more. love the meaning behind, to never give up even when times go tough, ya that's sum stuff mate. keep up the good work, research sum other poetry types to try (shadowpoetryDOTcom is a good place to start, or wikipedia) and work from there.