Me.

Who am I?
Whats my life?
Just a mistake?
What to do?
What path to take?
I need a break.
I've faced death once before
And laughed in it's face.
What can't I do?
What can't I take?
I'm about to break
I'm overwhelmed
I'm screaming
But you don't hear a sound
I look around
Who's here to help?
No one.
I'm lost in myself
And I can't get out
Work through the pain
Mind over matter
I just have to use my brain
I can get through it.
Rip, tear, scream
Do it!
The answer
I've finally found
I fall to the ground
I've gotten through it
I knew I could do it.
I can take anything
Gimme your best
And I'll give you mine
Because I've got the power
Of body and mind.

Reviews

[Miss unknown]

:) I love it. quick to the point, simple yet full of meaning. This is a poem which many people can relate to. Good job!!

[fernii]

Such an emotional but non emotional poem. It has lots of meaning and I can totally relate to it myself. I like the ending because it shows you've got through finding yourself if thats what you were trying to do :) great poem. Keep writing

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I love it!
I love all the emotions in it! good job :)

[Kaygexx]

oooh, i really like it. it gives people who don't actually know you a glimpse into your life, and i think it's good (: