Find Your Way

Sarah, oh Sarah

You just want respect,

Disdain for your brother

You think your life’s wrecked;

Just utter some words,

Your brother goes away

Oh to say those words you mustn’t say,

But one night it becomes too much

She must say the words!

Her voice fills with glee;

Goblin king, Goblin king

Take this child of mine far from me

But oh no, that’s not it

The child must stay

I wish I knew the words,

To make you go away

Then suddenly her eyes fill with light

As the words inside her mouth begin take flight

Oh, these words she could almost say with a bow

I wish the goblins would take you away,

Right now.

After what happens next

She’s filled with dismay

The Goblin king,

Really took him away

Then he appears,

Sarah fills with fright

You get but one chance,

And you must get it right

13 hours to find your way

You must find your brother,

In less than a day

She roams around

Going this way and that

One door brings survival

Choose the other and splat!

Oh this labyrinth

So much Sarah hates

Wills she find her brother?

Only time will tell

But as for right now

Her life’s living hell;

Does she find her brother?

Maybe, we’ll see

Someone might tell you

But that someone’s not me.

Author's Note

I would like to thank Ostensible Truth's for inspiring me to write this(:
(andd i noticed this kind of sounds.. Dr. Suess-ishh)

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

Yeah I think Dr.Suess definitely. But I like it. :D

[OT]

:) glad to have inspired a write! and a fine write it is too - you weave around the Labyrinth - redefining it with your own views and interpretations in what I agree is a Seuss like rhyme - especially towards the end - the questioning - did she see? - maybe? - who knows? - not me? - a very well spun tale, with a strong lingering rhyme scheme!! nice, nice!!