That Living Hell

Those picked on mercilessly

Cry out for help

They know of nothing

But remorse, and regret

Hatred for those who abuse them

Yet none come to their side

Into their own hands

Their lives may fall

But I say onto those people

I am here

Here for all who need someone

I’ve been there and surpassed it

That living hell!

It doesn’t last for eternity

But only for a little while longer

We all fall the fate of mortality

And it will eventually come

Do not take your life early

There’s too much to be done

So many are here

And the end is coming near

Every second it draws closer

Closer every second, day, year

It’s here

You’ve got so little time

Come out of the dark

The despair is gone

For all those who do you wrong

Will most certainly

Live in the hell

They’ve created for you

Reviews

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

"It doesn’t last for eternity
But only for a little while longer
We all fall the fate of mortality
And it will eventually come
Do not take your life early
There’s too much to be done"

That's amazing. I honestly love it! It was a very good read :)

[0_o Abbie]

This poem is insanely good. I LOVE LOVE LOVE it. It's amazing.

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A wonderfully constructed poem about reaching out to someone in need. I enjoyed the read.

[Angela]

a painful read. How those can be looked over with deep souls and much to add to the human experience is beyond me. Keep writing. Purge.

[Megan Erica]

Shannneeee this is realllyyy good (: ♥ Gooo look at minee (: