The Life Less Lived

Now guys this is the first poem I've ever written... So I hope ya like it(:

My life is one of ups & downs
I used to do the normal thing
Go through the motions unlike a like a human being
Then I gave my life to Him

Drastically I changed
Going through motions no more
I live life how I please
Smiles once never there
Now come with ease

My life changed when God came
He opened my eyes
I see now what I didn't before
How to live life like it was meant to be

To put smiles on every face
Give the sad ones a warm embrace
Spread the word of God
And live the life less lived

Reviews

[Poison Soulz]

pretty good! You have talent =) good job! I liked the flow and the message