Thief

She had eyes that were big and beautiful, but full of mystery. She had a smile that was equally big. The smile I could tell, meant that she had been around and knew how to work herself out of a situation. She had beauty, but not American classic beauty...more European.

 A personality that could make anyone stand still, stare and be captivated. You could tell people were drawn to this thief and now I could see why. She's dangerous and people won't expect this: clever, quick-mouthed and sarcastic: she will have moved on before you have time to react.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

I was hooked and had some funny soliloquy while reading it. But oh yes from the rise
of the Alpha Female calmly passing through Female superiority and why no FemDom even to the captivating allure of the Femme Fatale things have change and I for once will not mess around with her.

No dear I aint looking at her!!!

Thankyou for this captivating piece

[CS]

:) :) yes, that is what I was truly trying to captivate. Hopefully I will get back to this piece, when I finish all the other projects I'm working on. :) Thank you very much!

[A. Amos]

Short and gripping piece, truly enjoyed the read.

[CS]

thank you very much!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Samuel Dickens]

Pretty good so far. You've got me interested.

[CS]

Thanks! It's just a little piece I wrote. I hadn't developed anything else yet with it...currently working on a children's series. I will have to come back and play around with it at a later date. :)

[Samuel Dickens]

I know how it is. For my part, I think further work on it would be worthwhile.