My Awesome Roof

My rooftop is so awesome,

No other can compare,

While mine has a cool circular style,

Yours is just a silly boring square.

 

My rooftop is kickass,

It can put you in a trance,

When you stare at it for long,

It seems like you’re in a spiral dance.

 

The paint was sprayed on,

When we see bugs we kill them with Baygon,

When she’s bored and doesn’t know what to do,

My mother cleans the roof with a broom.

 

This is all I have to say,

Maybe I’ll write another poem some other day,

But till then this will have to do,

This is the poem about my AWESOME ROOF.  

Author's Note

Wrote this in idleness! Proud of it though :D

Reviews

[cyber dork]

ur mental !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u knw tht like it tho .

[Romeion Case]

:-) This was sweet and playful....I liked it.

[Victoria Scott]

haha very cute..made me smile :D

[pamzilla. &hear..]

Bem Bem !! (Y)(Y)
Mayne, you be epicosity xD
You should put the picture of your roof up !
I'm def. putting this on FB :D