It is both

A jedi's gotta do what a jesi's gotta do.

Sailing away with nothing on my mind and back,

And staying away only to come close;

Into dawn of atom I'm returning back,

I'm returning back not knowing what I saw.

Maybe I just wasn't there at all

Or my ''conscience'' had no other choice

But to choose oblivion before all

The other things I ever saw.

And if I can ask a question

'Bout all that I forgot

'Bout all those dreams and memories

Then I'm a liar or it's paradox.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Maybe I just wasn't there at all
Or my ''conscience'' had no other choice
But to choose oblivion before all
The other things I ever saw."
These lines are so relatable. What wouldn't one give to be in blissful oblivion away from the miseries of the world. Nicely penned :)

[TormentedTales]

Was this poem real?
Maybe we'll never know.
Either way, sir, you're going to be a big deal.

Great work! Wish it was a little longer, but you are talented.

[Frontier]

I really like how flowy but tight the first stanza is...it made my mind expand and constrict

[isus]

im so glad you like it :))