Dream 31

From oblivion summoned together with time,

As we are rising and falling down

In opaque and one-way sequenced events;

Time and time again as we descend

 

And ascend back from where we begun,

Belting a sunset with dream of the Sun.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A well structured write on the surreal for me.

[isus]

hey, glad you like this :))

[Kim]

I learned a new word while reading this :P good work, its interesting and has a nice rhythm :)

[alanwgraham]

I like the way your words hang together but I'm not really sure what it is about! I'm not very good at interpreting this type of poem but I know that they are not always literal. I guess the title is the clue. My dreams don't make much sense either. Bye the bye, should begun be began?
Regards,
Alan

[isus]

thanx! its everithing you get out of it. just dont try so hard

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice poem! opaque is an interesting word, I never heard it before. Tyfs!

[isus]

well you learn every day i guess :)