I.M.E

cooperated

With nothing on my mind

I let this words colide

and travel to the end.

Deviation far behind

as a surface that will slide

and set us free in sand.

Take it, we all should know,

it may take some time,

but in slow perception, killing elegance lives

and noone is free untill we decide to give.

But

say your prayers and bulk up,

there are people to f**k up.

If you're medicated, faschist or saint

come to us we'll give you pain 

you can give to others.

Reviews

[D]

Hehe... Lovely. Seemingly an effortless crafting of lines...Almost as effortless as child's play. I like it. :)

[isus]

hey thanx. i dont find it good but it's ok i suppose :)

[D]

Your style gets a bit getting used to, but I like it. További szép napot. :)

[LastMonth]

Oh wow.
You caught me off guard with that last bit.
Nifty poem, you have talent. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll get even better.