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you may help me with grammar if you can

Slow down, this is through the lenses.

While you're reading this sentence

Sun is raging more than ever,

and all that because of single thought.

Walking through city of lies I encounter this:

''Our logic inadequate,

truncated, lying in a pool of our own blood,

existing only within terms we ourselves created 

just to have something to have.''

This was written on the other wall:

''Wherever we go patterns we find

leads us further from perspectives

we had when we were poisoned by

''dimensions'' of space and time.''

Then I had to go home, but i haven't had one

for I am insect on this page,

and I am orange on the desk

just waiting for next oblivion to begun.

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wonderfully done!
wise and unique!

''Our logic inadequate,
truncated, lying in a pool of our own blood,
existing only within terms we ourselves created
just to have something to have.''

[isus]

thanx on reading man

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Welcome!
Btw I'm a girl.

[isus]

oh, sorry :D

[WillaDanvers]

This is a great piece, different and unique but also very well written :)

[isus]

hey, i'm very glad you recognise this :)

[David E Navarro]

Enjoyed this. Well done, thanks for submitting to the Pride in Poetry contest. Since I will be judging this for the contest I will not write about it here (yet) nor rate it. Once the contest is over, I may drop by to leave a better review. Take care and keep on writing poetry.