1.618

1.618

A Poem by isus

The room full of deceptions.
And warmth of my skin slowly decay.

You could understand this only if you're made to.
Your thoughts are nothing, they're not even yours.

If you're alive it doesn't mean you're waiting for death,
and things they were teaching you they don't understand.

My sleeve is dark. 

I'm writing these words but they don't seem alive.
Truth lies in power of perception. 
And all meaning is lost when Master comes.

But you can be free to do as we tell you,
you can bring destruction to the universe.

Or you can rest in peace. Waiting for the next oblivion.

And now my brother, my share of energy,
what do you really know?
What do you want from you?

Just remember! 
The most important thing of all is

© 2016 isus


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How appropriate. I'm reading this on Fibonacci day (11/23) and your title invokes the Golden Ratio. Yes, there are patterns within patterns and it is certainly not certain that our thoughts are even ours. How many circles within circles have we passed through, round and round the circumference? It's hard to know. And perhaps the most important thing about being is just existence. An interesting piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

isus

7 Years Ago

i can agree on those words, and i have to say that this is one really nice review, maybe best i ever.. read more
Rick Puetter

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, and my complements!



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Great wording!
Very well done!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


It starts with "We living in the fake world".
And it ends with a question who's answer lies in our inner self "Follow your heart"
It was nice reading your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


When we are being 'tutored' by those who don't even understand the teachings they promote then it's time to follow what our soul tells us instead.
I like the cliff-hanger ending - the answer will be different for each reader.Very philosophical !
Nicely done isus.

Posted 8 Years Ago


isus

8 Years Ago

i agree, we should listen to ourselves much more

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