Stoned Alone

Take this!

I promise you,

it's the pill,

choice is yours

drink it

or spill,

I love you,

let me kill

you

Please, I'd love to ask you a question

I'd love to hear an answer

it's about particles and physics

and quantum mechanics,

maybe.

-but I love you,

I want to kill you,

because I can't;

you are light inside,

you are shining bright,

you can't see 'cause you are blind

star in brightless night

Reviews

[Phantom Heart]

It reminds me of that book, "I hate you, don't leave me."

[Aayushi]

I love the line i love you let me kill you...nice poem

[Oyindamola Shoola]

I had to read this over and over again to get a clear picture...but you did a good work here...I love the last two lines especially

[Nina C Palmer]

i agree with the review that said it is strange. I love these words... "you are blind
star in brightless night" that one line really made me stop.

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

Another beautiful work. Well done! I absolutely love it.

[Bluefire]

Strange but I like the way you played the words like chords on a guitar.
Well done. ^^

[stars are far]

That was very cute and bit powerful :)
I liked it :)

[Ruth]

Wow, we are so much more than flesh...seldom do we see it - infinite light - this is wonderfully executed x

[Luna Zerimar]

Wow. This is really well-written in my opinion.

I loved every line. Enjoyed every little word.

Good job.

[Inda]

Really love that last line,there is a spacious feel to this as a whole and that last line really makes use of it.