Now

is it time for me to go

or is it time at all

what i want and what you want

give me sword,

yes i will dance

dance for fire

dance for rain

dance for meaning

dance for death,

i will dance in sea of knowledge

or i will sink in worst oblivion.

Reviews

ah... simply deep and well created. I can see this during open mike.. the lights down low... a speaker... a dancer and drums.... you created a wonderful image in my head.

[A. H. Pinley]

Not wordy, but maybe not wordy enough.

[swarupa]

this is really good ..dance and enjoy the special moments. nice one

[Ashley Griffiths]

Take advantage of the moment and dance!

[Frontier]

Let's Dance! Dance the night Away!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wow, Z, I think this is one of your best... always dance, never sit in the corner of life wondering what would have happened...if i had only gotten up and danced. Loved this... perfect poem for me to have stumbled upon tonight. Fantastic!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Those last two lines really pack a punch, nicely done.

[Winchester Saltgunner]

wow this work is too good for words i wish it to be longer though

[Bluefire]

"yes i will dance
dance for fire
dance for rain
dance for meaning
dance for death,"
~*~
Intriguing and dark. Interesting, this may be my favorite piece of yours. ^^
Well played.

[Emily]

Love this one Isus! Well done.