Now

Now

A Poem by isus

is it time for me to go
or is it time at all
what i want and what you want
give me sword,
yes i will dance
dance for fire
dance for rain
dance for meaning
dance for death,
i will dance in sea of knowledge
or i will sink in worst oblivion.

© 2014 isus


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Great job, seems similar to stuff I write. Really liked it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was really good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


is it time for me to go
or is it time at all
what i want and what you want...

An Amezing poetry. Greatly penned....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Those last lines were the most impacting. This was a pleasure to read isus :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


A pleasure to read very well written isus
maria rose♥

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this poem particularly because it is realistic....dance for fire, dance for rain, dance for meaning, dance for death.. all these must come in ones life.....mere looking at this poem, it might seem simple and short but I am certain that there is more to it than the way it looks....well penned

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm not sure what I'm reading about here.
The rhythms and the use of repetition are fine.
Last 2 lines are great.
Sorry I can't say more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem is quiet good~
Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love those last two lines. This flows perfectly and you chose some awesome vocabulary. Really awesome work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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