Correlated

by my friend Vinko and i

Yes! There is a lovely bud under my sweet, sweet pillow, colored as a greyest mud. -And runs ahead a raving beast, stoner-chasing armadillo, straight from the east. You know what I know, but some things I don't know you appear to know. Is punk in your eyes suddenly fading, are you a smiling pacifist now, punk shall be pervading, but peace should be there for all.

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

I love that third stanza. Awesome writing!

[isus]

what is awesome about it :)

[MariaDahl1791]

Very interesting. I'm not sure what I think about armadillos. but good. Thanks

[isus]

hhehe thanx Maria

[Luna Zerimar]

Wow. This was pretty good. I like all the poems you write, though. Ha. Good job.

[isus]

strange to see that someone find it good haha

[SashaB]

wow, that's incredible, you know :)

[isus]

i don't belive you :)

[melissa]

Great poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[isus]

i find it hard to belive

[Saddam]

Amezingly write. A piece of art poetry. I enjoyed it much, mostly these lines

You know what I know,
but some things I don't know
you appear to know.

[isus]

wow, i think you overreacting

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, I loved it. :-)

Kaze~

[isus]

interesting.. thanx anyway :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :-)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Z!!! XD haha okay it was cats before and now armadillos? So you are the stoner chasing it?? I am loving this one...where is Son when we need him??? lol

[isus]

hehheh thanx Karen

[RichGee]

Lovely bud under the pillow?
Is that a Sour or Haze bud?
Nice.

[isus]

i don't know really

[Kasey Miriam]

Very ineresting, entertaining poem I enjoyed it

[isus]

thanx Kasey