Correlated

by my friend Vinko and i

Yes! There is a lovely bud under my sweet, sweet pillow, colored as a greyest mud. -And runs ahead a raving beast, stoner-chasing armadillo, straight from the east. You know what I know, but some things I don't know you appear to know. Is punk in your eyes suddenly fading, are you a smiling pacifist now, punk shall be pervading, but peace should be there for all.

Reviews

[alduin]

Interesting, kinda something different and new to read. It's usually something that I'd wouldn't read, but from it's "odd" point of view it's quite entertaining.

[isus]

hehhe glad you think so

[Chidoriflower]

Kind of refreshing...like someone was high when writing this..xD Enjoyable read, with a bit of philosophical wittiness at the end. Heh heh nice

[isus]

we were high haha

[Chidoriflower]

kyahahahahaha

[Inda]

I like it, just felt like it went in a different direction in the end and maybe too much repetition in terms of "punk". I understand the point in the end seems to be there's more beneath the friendship, but the over use of the word punk i think adds mud to the waters if you will and thus it's harder to understand the message. Having said that, it is a great piece that's honest and creative.

[isus]

we was high while writing it

[Inda]

That explains it all! Lol

[Frontier]

Interesting theme, hmm about weed I presume. Funny word play in the second stanza. The last stanza is also quite interesting, a lot of paradoxes and contradictions here. Keep it up!

[isus]

yeah, it's also writen by weed hehe

[Created to Write]

I tend to not understand poems much, but it sounds interesting.

[isus]

i know :)

[icelandicblue]

We all feel the beast from time to time but I also believe we all crave peace.

[Emily]

I like how you started it! Good job!

[isus]

i know ;)

[CrashQueen♛]

I enjoyed this even if I do not completely understand it.

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[KWP]

hehehe I always smile for some reason when reading your poems ..... its like a choose your own adventure ... make of it what you will :)

[isus]

great :D