Rain is gonna fall

I'm amazed that

truth is there

for those who stare

and

did you know that

you can sell your

soul for gold

and

once that gold

has bought your

soul,

you look and see

you're nothing

but the dead man.

Without no needs

with heavy thoughts

bended colors

fading anyway..

Nothing to say,

too much to speak,

lend me your eyes,

I'm dead before

the end.

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

The last stanza is beautiful! It is true, though. Gold does buy a lot of souls.

[isus]

with our love we can change the world........

[Luna Zerimar]

True, but...where do find love? Because, there's barely anymore.

[isus]

within yourself and everywhereeeeeeeee :)))))

[Luna Zerimar]

:) Ha. Okay.

[isus]

http://youtu.be/ljnv3KGtcyI

[Rachelle]

The dilemma we all face now is how to live our lives without succumbing to what is worldly and material. It takes a brave and enlightened individual to seek joy in what is humble and simple and yet, live a full life. Sometimes, we have to take a step away from the rat race and reflect upon why we are doing what we are doing and if it is all worth it.
Great message, Isus!

[isus]

we all should do that :) thanx Rachelle

[Rachelle]

You're welcome, Isus!

[Mercury Rising]

Selling one's soul for gold is definitely something that invites sure DEATH. I love this! There is so much more to life than money. Sure, money helps get the things we need, but beyond our needs, money is meant to be SHARED with those in need. However, greed is still out there, and there are those who pose as destitute just to live off charity of others, so ... makes it hard to determine just who is really in need and who is just out for an easy living...

But what does it profit a man if he gain the whole world and lose his own soul?

Great job! Keep up the good writing!
Cheers--
...S.

[isus]

i just thought of this http://youtu.be/ljnv3KGtcyI :))

[Emily]

I love this poem! I am putting it on my library as favorites

[isus]

thanx Emily :)

[Bowers]

This is incredible, very deep with meaning..
"Nothing to say,
too much to speak,
lend me your eyes,
I'm dead before
the end."
how powerful I felt these words were...
great write!

[isus]

thanx for stoping by Bowers

[Blue]

"truth is there
for those who stare"

-I like the wisdom embedded in the above lines.

"fayding anyway.." -> delete "y"

[isus]

thanx for niticing :D