Rain is gonna fall

I'm amazed that

truth is there

for those who stare

and

did you know that

you can sell your

soul for gold

and

once that gold

has bought your

soul,

you look and see

you're nothing

but the dead man.

Without no needs

with heavy thoughts

bended colors

fading anyway..

Nothing to say,

too much to speak,

lend me your eyes,

I'm dead before

the end.

Reviews

[Savannah Bly]

I'm amazed that
truth is there
for those who stare
and
did you know that
you can sell your
soul for gold

Hooked from the beginning! Great job! :)

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful peom. It is deep And very well organized

[isus]

thanx Kasey :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Deep awesome job:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[isus]

hey, thanx very much :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

welcome :)))))))))))))))

[Hannah]

Really like the way you talk about the soul

[isus]

hm, glad you like it :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love the dark and gloomy feel to this poem. Beautifully written.

Kaze~ :-)

[isus]

thanx Kaze

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome my friend. :-)

[Hypnos]

And yet at one point Christians thought they could buy their way into heaven. Very well written. Love the dark and gloom.

[isus]

religions..........

[Hypnos]

Indeed, religions.

[Inda]

This is fantastic! Gloomy and dark, just perdect!

[isus]

thanx thanx glad you like it :)

[Saddam]

Nothing to say,
too much to speak,
lend me your eyes,
I'm dead before
the end.

Fantastic poetry. Lovely....

[isus]

you are too kinf+d really

[Baby Ricochet]

Sell your soul for gold so you won't be homeless when you're old. Good poem

[isus]

hahahha great one Ric :D

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Once again you dig deep into your soul and find wisdom and truth....

"Without no needs
with heavy thoughts
bended colors
fading anyway.."

Gorgeous lines, what a wonderful write, Z, beautiful work!

[isus]

i can't belive you really saying that. too kind once again dear Karen