Misinterpreted wordS

After all these years

I found my violin

with all the things

without her bow

for all I know

is to play guitar

and sound that's forming

in liquid foams

lasts for moment

of the tan sand.

Desert around us is

bending city of shade,

making us all hungry and in

the wish of poison

Reviews

[stars are far]

very well done..and the violin ,.you used that in a very nice way..
i love it ,

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[gabrielle]

A violin cannot serve is purpose without its bow and what's the use of the guitar when it can only produce music on temporary basis? ah, this piece spoke to me about being alone. very well-penned, isus.

[isus]

nicu interpretation gabrielle :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a stunning write, your a very talented writer.

Kaze~

[isus]

you really think so?

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Yes I do. :-)

[Melissa S]

This was really interesting to read. I had to read it multiple times to really get a grasp at it, but thats perfectly okay. I love poetry that makes me think and dig into the meanings between the lines. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work :)

[isus]

nice to know that :)

[Blood Ink Diary]

A symphony of subtle and intense emotions - a rhythm that carries magical and surreal music in words. Ah, yes, 'the wish of poison - a sharp octave in the scale of emotions.
I relished the simplicity in the poem, which in essence is grand. Cheers, dear Isus.

[isus]

thanx for reading Shaheen :)

[Tinkerbellje]

A solemn poem, one I think that conveys loneliness. Nicely written. Well done.

[isus]

thanx for stop by

[HeazerH]

This is really pretty. Good poem.

[isus]

thanx Heazer

[HeazerH]

Anytime. Thanks for writing

[Emily]

I like how you worded this poem!

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Created to Write]

I'll admit, It's a little hard for me to read poetry sometimes. But after reading it again, I noticed that it has small phrases that have one thing in common: A sense of something missing, forgotten, or too far away to grasp.

A beautiful poem if you read it correctly.

[isus]

i agree awith you. thanx on reading!

[emmajoy]

Such an empty sound though, bits missing or misformed, sadness in distorted liquid foam music. Perhaps. A different plane to walk across in these words, ''Desert around us is ~ bending city of shade .. '

[isus]

yeah, similar feeling i got too when reading it