Misinterpreted wordS

After all these years

I found my violin

with all the things

without her bow

for all I know

is to play guitar

and sound that's forming

in liquid foams

lasts for moment

of the tan sand.

Desert around us is

bending city of shade,

making us all hungry and in

the wish of poison

Reviews

[Norah]

Play on the violin for me and I'll dance for you

[isus]

would you dance around it if i burn it?

[Norah]

only if it amuses you

[isus]

it would for shure :D

[Irenic]

it is a very well written poem.

The way you give us, reader a message that how we misunderstand several things is fantastic.

thanks for sharing

[isus]

thanx for reading

[Irenic]

..............................................:)

[Frontier]

Wow I really like the ending, last stanza, what interesting imagery! Trying to picture a desert as a bending city of shade and it's making us hungry and wishing for poison, it is utterly amazing, I'm not even joking! Bravo, bravo!!!

[isus]

are you shure you're not joking :p glad you like it :D

[Frontier]

Not joking! I wouldn't be surprised to see that part in a poem of a well-known poet!

[isus]

well i think that could be a compliment, thank you :)

[=Kirakishou=]

Nice,short but very good,really really good one!

[isus]

thanx Kirakishou :)

[Inda]

Really powerful and short! Like a tequila shot! Great stuff.

[isus]

hhehe i like the comparison :D

[Bluefire]

Thought provoking and random.
I like it! ^^

[isus]

thanx blue

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[L4rn13]

Intreguing write. Short and quick tot he point. Nice.

[isus]

to the what point? :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I am not even going to attempt an interpretation, but just to say... awesome imagery, isus!

[isus]

thanx Lori :)

[Kira Jaye]

very unique! Is it a palindrome? I just read it backwards too and it still made since and was just as beautiful.

[isus]

no, it was most random, so cool you notice it :D

[kublakhan27]

A lot of imagination and human nature in this piece...a relatively small work in which you've managed to say many things, enough to truly make the reader think. In light of the title, and my notorious history of badly misinterpreting things, I am scared to say too much, but I will say that this one left an imprint on my imagination. It is what a poem should be on many levels...awesome work Isus.

[isus]

don't worry about misinterpreting because it's here for you and me to interprete it on our ways all over again and again :)