Oh when the sun beat down upon my face

again by Keva and me.

Oh what a beautiful day

In April street

And just by the corner is a

Bicycle shop

Where I'm buying bike

Right now.

So I'm gonna take a ride

under the Sun

in April street

boy, that's gonna be a trip!

Ain't that just swell

Riding my new bicycle

Here, on this sunny day

In April street

Reviews

[MandaClarine]

so happy! I loved it, well done

[isus]

glad to know you like it :)

[Anusha Prabhu]

Simple... Apt!! N all it can be for what its worth! Loved it ;)

[isus]

hey, thanx for stoping by :)

[HeazerH]

I like this poem because it is refreshing. Thanks for writing.

[isus]

no, thank you for reading :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Spring is a beautiful thing

[isus]

it really is Ric :D

[Mercury Rising]

Reminds me of a combination of the Queen songs 'Seaside Rendezvous' and 'Bicycle'. Cool...

[isus]

oh always nice to see someone listen great music!

[gabrielle]

You vividly painted a bright carefree summer days. A very positive write.

[isus]

thanx for stoping by

[Frieda P]

Like a sunny smile on your page. Now if it would just stop raining, we could ride. :-)

Sound be 'a' bike.

[isus]

well spoken :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Ill have to say yes because I am a road cyclist, I remember my 1st time buying my dream bike it was second hand but like new:) 2007 Salsa It cost 1,199 dollars I have a bit more in it as well. People flip out when I tell them what it cost me. Some bikes are ten thousand or better. But its a lot different from the ole Huffy back in the day, I have got this bike up to 55mph riding down hill, you have to pedal or you get took off the road in a hurry, I know some guys have done 65 mph and that's a rush! Bike weighs less than 10lbs

[isus]

there really are some awesome bikes, i don't need no car or anything when i have good bike. people should drive bikes much more.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

I agree 100 %

[Tinkerbellje]

You're describing a happy and positive day in a nice little poem. Well done!

[isus]

thanx :)

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i love reading them sending me more to read

[isus]

i will melissa