Oh when the sun beat down upon my face

again by Keva and me.

Oh what a beautiful day

In April street

And just by the corner is a

Bicycle shop

Where I'm buying bike

Right now.

So I'm gonna take a ride

under the Sun

in April street

boy, that's gonna be a trip!

Ain't that just swell

Riding my new bicycle

Here, on this sunny day

In April street

Reviews

[Irenic]

What a cute and lovely poem which expresses your freedom and jolly behaviour.

[isus]

thanx again :)

[Irenic]

......................................:)

[Greg Agee]

short and to the point, upbeat, good read

[Frontier]

Stars to fill my dreams....I am a traveler of both time and space...to be where I have been...

:)

[Chidoriflower]

Ahh I need to ride my bike. This is a swell hep poem. Nice.

[isus]

hahah glad you like it :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Cute tale of biking in the sun.

[isus]

isn't it :D

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

yes I like it.

[Ravyne Hawke]

this is adorable.. with the images of the Bike, April, and the street. Nice collaboration!

[isus]

hehe it really is

[Kleio13]

nostalgic,all I can say to myself is " I can barely look the poet in the eye". Great again

[isus]

what thoes that phrase mean? :D

[Kleio13]

It means that your heart is too full and your art of words is lively, therefore It's a lot to take in when I read your work

[isus]

oh i see it now, well i don't know if my heart is full, i mostly find it rather empty, but it's nice to know that :)

[Kleio13]

You feel empty because your words are too bold

[isus]

bold in which way?

[Kleio13]

the good way

[isus]

you know how to lost me hehe

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be a good day. A warm day, new bike and a long ride. Nice visions create by the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[isus]

hey thanx on reading :)

[KWP]

A very happy and smiley poem, within it's simplicity one can remember that life is only as complex as we make it .... or perhaps it just serves as a reminder to get on my bike and go for a ride ... hehehe x x

[isus]

that's right i guess :) anyway, you should rideeee

[KWP]

riiidddddeeeeee sally riiidddeeee

[isus]

hahha sally cant dance :D

[Bluefire]

It reminded me of a song I heard once, though I can't remember what it was called. >.<
Nice write. ^^

[isus]

thanx :)

[Bluefire]

You're welcome!