This is powerful when you relate it to a personal event. Thank you for this, so many people can interpret it in different ways and that's what art is for.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Well done, thanks for submitting to the Pride in Poetry contest. Since I will be judging this for the contest I will not write about it here (yet) nor rate it. Once the contest is over, I may drop by to leave a better review. Take care and keep on writing poetry.
I really like how you end it with "doors are open" it's sort of unexpected and only emphasizes how trapped one can feel. I also like the written in blood part, words, esp. from certain people are so powerful.
oh, this is one piece that i can say i really like and i can understand your view of it. i think we .. read moreoh, this is one piece that i can say i really like and i can understand your view of it. i think we have similar poetry and i wish you are here somewhere near so we can hang around, i think i would really love you
10 Years Ago
:) You know, that thought also passed thru my mind, about the similarity in writing. Yeah I also fee.. read more:) You know, that thought also passed thru my mind, about the similarity in writing. Yeah I also feel I would enjoy your friendship, I am there in spirit! :)