Melancholic Sunshine

Morning faded in,

I saw it through the window,

I think that Sun has grown

into morning sin.

Right up there, you see?

Shining light of brilliance

sifting through our lenses

making us to feel..

miserable and in need of

some foreign and new perception,

some new drug with new sensation..

But

you know that Now is only

state of time for us to be

and the time is nothing but the

reflection of you and me.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I think Sun has grown
into morning sin.... you had me right there, yearning for new awareness, yet living in the moment, I really like this one a lot isus....

[isus]

thanx Frieda, always pleasure to see your thoughts here :)

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was mine :-)

[Emily]

Nice little poem! Good job!

[isus]

thanx Emily

[maria ( rose)]

Melancholic Sunshine wow! good read well thought out. Thanks for sharing.
maria rose

[isus]

thanx for stoping by, glad you like it :)

[SonOfPlunder]

Probably one of my favourite pieces by you! Good job man

[isus]

great to know that, i like it also, which i can't say for a lot of my work

[KeeD]

This was deep and thought provoking! Beautifully written.

[isus]

thanx thanx :)