Melancholic Sunshine

Melancholic Sunshine

A Poem by isus

Morning faded in,
I saw it through the window,
I think that Sun has grown
into morning sin.

Right up there, you see?
Shining light of brilliance
sifting through our lenses
making us to feel..

miserable and in need of
some foreign and new perception,
some new drug with new sensation..

But

you know that Now is only
state of time for us to be
and the time is nothing but the
reflection of you and me.

© 2016 isus


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Fantastic! The last line really lift this piece to a another level! Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

hey, thanx! really glad you like it :)
This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

too kind of you, too kind. but thank you anyway, i'll try to keep it coming :)
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
"you know that Now is only
state of time for us to be
and the time is nothing but the
reflection of you and me."
~*~
I think the names fits perfectly with this. I like this.
Well done. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thanx Blue, glad you like it
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
Absolutely beautiful. Great poetry!

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thanx Rebecca :)
This is wonderful! Bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thanx Brittany :)
Nice little poem. Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thanx Ric
Morning faded in,
I saw it through the window,
I think Sun has grown
into morning sin.

Wow, that is a gorgeous beginning to a brilliant poem... I am in awe on how well you can write in a language that is not your own. I would love to hear this read in your native tongue. Good read, Z... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

i think you are far too kind dear Karen, far far far too kind :) and this thing doesn't exsist on my.. read more
Perception of life and those that surround you...
reflections of what it is....
in time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

just like that Josie :)
Very well done. This poem captured me in just a few lines

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

thank you Kasey :)
Kasey Miriam

10 Years Ago

you are very welcome
i agree with Frieda...that opener quite engaging...over the horizon there will be new perception, but what counts now is the perception we have of each other in this moment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isus

10 Years Ago

very true! i wouldn't have nothing to add there

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isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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