Melancholic Sunshine

Morning faded in,

I saw it through the window,

I think that Sun has grown

into morning sin.

Right up there, you see?

Shining light of brilliance

sifting through our lenses

making us to feel..

miserable and in need of

some foreign and new perception,

some new drug with new sensation..

But

you know that Now is only

state of time for us to be

and the time is nothing but the

reflection of you and me.

Reviews

[Inda]

Fantastic! The last line really lift this piece to a another level! Great job.

[isus]

hey, thanx! really glad you like it :)

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read

[isus]

too kind of you, too kind. but thank you anyway, i'll try to keep it coming :)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Bluefire]

"you know that Now is only
state of time for us to be
and the time is nothing but the
reflection of you and me."
~*~
I think the names fits perfectly with this. I like this.
Well done. ^^

[isus]

thanx Blue, glad you like it

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[Rebecca Nelson]

Absolutely beautiful. Great poetry!

[isus]

thanx Rebecca :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is wonderful! Bravo!

[isus]

thanx Brittany :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice little poem. Great job

[isus]

thanx Ric

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Morning faded in,
I saw it through the window,
I think Sun has grown
into morning sin.

Wow, that is a gorgeous beginning to a brilliant poem... I am in awe on how well you can write in a language that is not your own. I would love to hear this read in your native tongue. Good read, Z... :)

[isus]

i think you are far too kind dear Karen, far far far too kind :) and this thing doesn't exsist on my native langauge :) i don't do translations

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Perception of life and those that surround you...
reflections of what it is....
in time.

[isus]

just like that Josie :)

[Kasey Miriam]

Very well done. This poem captured me in just a few lines

[isus]

thank you Kasey :)

[Kasey Miriam]

you are very welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with Frieda...that opener quite engaging...over the horizon there will be new perception, but what counts now is the perception we have of each other in this moment.

[isus]

very true! i wouldn't have nothing to add there