Mamma's Song

this is one song with music that my friend wrote and i wrote words. it's country music ;D ;D

Ma' mamma always told me

not to bring a gun,

that it's unsafe and in a way

I have to say that she can't see.

I can say that it is ok and...

I can say that it's far away and...

Ma mamma always told me

you can't fix the sun

so you can be metal can and then

you'll feel that it's amusing you.

So call me far from home

where sun is not alone

and ground is blue,

Though my heart's so heavenly grey.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Always good to listen to advice and this is lovely...

[isus]

maybe not always? :D

[Rita L. Sev]

Best to listen to Mamma... I like the rhythm of this; yes, lyrics for sure.

[isus]

but she can't see :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Moms tell you a lot of stuff you end up doing anyway

[isus]

very true indeed Ric

[Jess]

I really like this. It has a really nice flow to it. Great job!

[isus]

thanx Jess

[Blue]

I wish to hear this with melody because I like country music. Also, I suggest that you write this in a lengthier fashion with a chorus and all those musical terminologies. ;)

[isus]

maybe when we record it you will hear it :) i'll let you know

[Tina Louise UK]

Great lyrics hun...really enjoyed :) x

[isus]

thanx Tia :)

[Bluefire]

"Ma mamma always told me
you can't fix the sun
so you can be metal can and then
you'll feel that it's amusing you."
~*~
I like where this poem goes. Well done. ^^

[isus]

thank you thank you :)

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Brook]

Very lovely. I like how it flows :)

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[MsJewel]

I could definitely imagine this as a county song. Very nice. Thank you for the read request.

:) Julie

[isus]

if you just could hear it, it's great :D i mean music is great, my friend is really talented and hardworking, he makes good stuff. anyway, thanx for reading Julie :)

[HeazerH]

I like this. I do not really have a "mom" , but if I did then this would remind me of her, so well written for sure.

[isus]

well thanx, nice to see that :)

[HeazerH]

Thanks for writing it.