Mamma's Song

this is one song with music that my friend wrote and i wrote words. it's country music ;D ;D

Ma' mamma always told me

not to bring a gun,

that it's unsafe and in a way

I have to say that she can't see.

I can say that it is ok and...

I can say that it's far away and...

Ma mamma always told me

you can't fix the sun

so you can be metal can and then

you'll feel that it's amusing you.

So call me far from home

where sun is not alone

and ground is blue,

Though my heart's so heavenly grey.

Reviews

[C.m.v.]

I can definitely see this being a catchy country song...miranda or Carrie could sing this. :)

[isus]

i would show you if we made record, but my friend is now in ireland and im in croatia so we cant record it :/

[Aunre]

Yee haw! I wonder what it would be like to dance to?

[Kleio13]

as a another poet to another, all we can do is bring the sky down for us, so we won`t keep falling. I love this poem

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Shaquana Adams]

This really does read like a song. I like the message. Nicely penned ^-^

-QuanaWana

[isus]

thanx :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Good lyrics.. I like the lesson behind it.. Momma always looking out for her kids.

[isus]

hey, glad you like it :)

[KeeD]

This was really cool, I'd love to hear it as well to be honest and plans on recording it?
The lyrics have meaning to them more than just the first read, you really have to read into them. Love it.

[isus]

it will be recorded once we find something good to record with. and when we do i'll put it here so all you can hear it :D

[KeeD]

Sounds awesome, looking forward to it :)

[icelandicblue]

Mama says a lot of things to protect her children. It doesn't always work though but we can't always predict the outcome. I enjoyed this.

[isus]

yup, that's right. glad you like it :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Well, I am absolutely in love with these lyrics you wrote and adore the message behind it. Just goes to show that Mamma always knows best, even if we don't think so sometimes! But from the first line, it instantly reminded me of a Johnny Cash song which the lyrics went "Momma always told me, don't ever play with guns, but I shot a man in Reno..." I love Johnny Cash, as you probably don't know, but I'm glad you were able to remind me of such a legend!

[isus]

hey i love Johnny also but i didn't listen to him too much, i started listening to him lately little more. 'hello my name is Johnny Cash' :D really a legend :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Oh my god, I say that line to myself randomly nearly all the time! My dad used to listen to him, so he introduced me to his music shortly after I got into The Beatles and other Oldies type music. But yes, truly one of my favorite musicians of all time.

[isus]

me too :D the Beatles.. greatest band to me.

[I Am Svetlana]

Yes, I adore the Beatles! They played "When I'm 64" at my Grandpa's funeral service. But yeah, I love the animated Yellow Submarine movie. So amazing!

[isus]

true true :)

[Mercury Rising]

Trough? Is this supposed to be 'Through' or 'Though'? or perhaps even 'Tough'? I'm a bit lost with this one - just being honest. Maybe you could shed a little light on the subject for us?

[isus]

it is really a line that was writen by my friend who wrote music for the song. i couldn't came up with anything so he wrote it and it just stayed that way :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words and I could feel the song in the words. Just needed a voice and some music. The strong statements give life to the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[isus]

thanx for reading :)