Most Righteous

this is by my friend Keva and me.

My sword killed god

in cinderella shoe,

he fell on ground

and then they called him

devil.

what is the difference between sheep?

-9.

My cat wants to die,

it's fine

Reviews

[C. Rose]

So clever. I don't understand "in cinderella shoe" but I love -9. My cat wants to die, it's fine.

[Aunre]

Hmm... an oblate spheroid hurled through the air, caught by a chance interception. It's down at the 9.

[Kleio13]

hahaha . You know, some people just say that this is creative and sometimes that`s all they can say. Although, I would like to know what your personification of "god" is in this poem as opposed to the Cinderella shoe falling on the ground. Does the poem symbolize a good girl in a broken family preserving her fires?

[isus]

it simbolize that for you, you saw it, for me it doesn't have any meaning untill i read it again and see something new in it :)

[Kleio13]

I see. Same for my poems

[Bowers]

very creative, I like how its simple, yet it draws you to create your own impressions and conclusions. A very interesting write!

[little bad puppy]

uuhhh....niffty. not quite shure what your going for? try a llitle more imagery. like "in cinderalla broken shoe.". i don't know maybe i don't get it.

[isus]

there is not much to get here. you get as much as you want in this case :)

[little bad puppy]

oh oh i get it! it's a duck. duck right? feel like the verbal equivalent of those 3D posters.

[isus]

what does duck mean, i mean, i know what is duck, but i dont understand :/

[Ravyne Hawke]

Interesting poem, isus... I love the imagery of god in a cinderella shoe. Nice work

[isus]

thanx Lori :)

[Rachelle]

I am still trying to figure this out. Quite a riddle…. but then, I analyze too much.

[isus]

there is one song from the band called Queen- Don't try so hard :)

[Rachelle]

It says enter at least ten characters but all I want to say is:

;D

[isus]

that's funny :D

[Coyote Poetry]

God, shoe and the poor cat. A lot in the poem. I hope the cat is okay. Thank you for sharing the interesting poetry.
Coyote

[isus]

is it really interesting?

[Alene Parr]

Very different and unique. I like it! It reminds me of a song lyric I really like: "Don't feel bad for the suicidal cats. Gotta kill themselves nine times before they get it right." Nice job!

[isus]

funny lyrics :D anyway thanx for stoping by

[L4rn13]

Very psychedelic and lucid, though treasure the moments you have with your cat, acceptance is good as it allows the pain to be a little easier to bear but cherishing the moment is better.
Love the poem. Very nice. Please send me more read requests.

[isus]

well thanx, glad you like it :) there might be more of the work soon :)