Elegance Alive

Silent god

and silent cat,

and cat is black

like death or night,

in dark of space

her eyes shine bright

Reviews

[Tasha]

so simple yet explains a lot. I like it (:

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Baby Ricochet]

I like this one. It was fun

[isus]

thanx for reading Ric

[Bri 810]

This reminds me of the Egyptian cat gods. :)

[isus]

i have one of them here right beside me :D

[Bri 810]

Bast perhaps?

[isus]

i dont know for shure but she is very similar

[KWP]

Hey nice words
try using verbs as the first word on each line it will add multitudes of depth, question weather you need the words and, in ...
just some thoughts xx

[isus]

i will consider it, im not very well with english so i have a lots to learn :D thanks for reading !

[KWP]

pleasure and anytime xx

[Frieda P]

Cats do have a superiority complex and they don't care if you know it, they are however the most elegant of creatures...clever read.

[isus]

they really dont care :D

[Brook]

Short, and sweet. i think it's lovely, good job.

[isus]

thank you :)

[Rita L. Sev]

"Cats were once revered as gods, and they have never forgotten this..." - a saying that your poem brought to mind. A brief piece with clever imagery, Isus.

[isus]

i always liked cats like other animals and then one cat ended up in my yard and now she is with us and she is black and shiny, without her i would never know what is cats really all about, thanx for reading :)

[Mercutio]

Short ,but it had meaning. Good work my friend.

[isus]

glad you like it

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[isus]

thank you thank you :)

[HeazerH]

Short but sweet. I like it.

[isus]

glad to see that :)