Elegance Alive

Silent god

and silent cat,

and cat is black

like death or night,

in dark of space

her eyes shine bright

Reviews

[Aunre]

It rhymes... death itself is never silent; only the aftermath. Shining bright, AA.

[isus]

what is death :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Short, packed with images of this!

[isus]

thanx for stoping by Josie :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Ah! Bast come to life with a stroke of your pen! My own is curled up beside me, watching, a knowingness between us. Delightful read

[isus]

oh, so nice to know that, greet yur little friend from me :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I will indeed!

[L4rn13]

Very nice predatory atmosphere within your words. Very nice write, short and quick to the chase like a cat hunting its prey, thanks for sharing.

[isus]

she hunts and it's over :D thanx for reading

[Kruppz]

interesting but i can't figure where it's going

[isus]

the way i see it, it's not going anywhere :D

[Chris]

I felt the tones and a predator's grace.

[isus]

really nice, beautiful aftermath

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I think i see a similar theme here in your writing Isus... feline affection? That is ok, I have it too...lol.

"like the death or night
in dark of space
her eyes shine bright"

Very beautiful words scribed ...well done!

[isus]

i think you're too kind, its rubbish really, there is better stuff from me you can find, but all of it is pretty much rubbish

[isus]

but anyway, im glad you like it :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

hahah, no i am sure it is all quite good... I will have to be back to search your poetic archive.... I am hoping to find a chortle along with beauty... lol

[isus]

im afraid you'll find all kinds of things, but thats ok i think :D

[Bluefire]

Beautiful!
Makes me think of my cat Missy.
Very well done! ^^

[isus]

thanx for stoping by :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[AYVID N]

This is very interesting. Thank you for sharing.

[isus]

thank you for reading :)

[Jackson H. Harley]

Short but full of meaning, cool concept too :)

[isus]

thanx for stoping by