Road part one

Curse casting eyes

are lurking,

monkeyman's crying for himself.

He told me of his searching for peace,

and how it's hard to notice

smallest of the things.

It is very interesting 

that all I know is nothing,

and nothing couldn't fit.

Time become a megalith,

voice in head forgot to quit,

mockery of comedy.

Only common state for All

he says might be now.

Author's Note

Feel free to leave coment, like to know your opinion

Reviews

[Aunre]

Random... totally random. Where's my chainsaw?

[Kasey Miriam]

very intriguing. I really enjoyed reading this thank you for sharing it.

[isus]

thanx Kasey :)

[maria ( rose)]

this one here was intriguing, really liked that fourth stanza..

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Chris]

There are always "eyes" in the world that - in our mind - judge us and all the anothers for any weakness that can be dreamed up... when we let them, it's called "compromise" ...and when we don't - "suicide", "jihad", "apostasy", come to mind. Ever notice God isn't the one who tells a person who to kill, how to kill, the when - to kill, He's just the One somehow being praised by it being done...

"I believe it is peace in our time." - Neville Chamberlin 1938... continued with the death of how many, many, many millions throughout the whole world all the way up til now?

My comment is - "You have a grasp of reality - careful it shows."

[isus]

very well said, my friend, very well

[RichGee]

Intriguing...very intriguing....well done.

[isus]

thank you

[RichGee]

My pleasure

[L4rn13]

I like the atmosphere of this one. Feels like you journey along side them as they try to discover what they are looking for. Very nice.

[isus]

i can say thank you for reading and im glad you like it

[Baby Ricochet]

Love the third stanza......

[isus]

i am very glad to know that, thanx for reading

[Zahra]

Intriguing this one, interesting. Nice write

[isus]

thanx very much ::)

[KWP]

yes very interesting read ... all i know is i know nothing and nothing could't fit ... love this

i will have to think a while on that one

[isus]

thanx for reading :) i am glad you like it

[Frieda P]

Intriguing read, not sure if it has religious undertones, or addiction, the 'monkeyman' got my attention and led me down that path.

[isus]

thank you very much for reading, i love your rewiews, they give me new insights :)

[Frieda P]

Oh good, I love when that happens too, another writer discovers something in my writing I don't see, gives us more to relish don't ya think? ...and my pleasure always. :-)