From me to you

so bla bla bla, feel fre to criticize :)

movies full of sunlight glades and panoramic views,

you infuse toxicity, nothing is away from us,

don't wish bitter wishes, also don't belive in news,

I am here for everyone, if you don't race, then you can't lose.

Is there any right decision,

is there one unequal question?

this is just my own perspective,

my constrained imagination.

Awake again in morning,

didn't slept last night,

despite expectations smoking 'nother joint,

days of losing mind in haze (have come).

Wonderfull sun points at me in silence,

poetry is everything it is

and everything it isn't, for creation is flawless

till the point of New where difference is borned.

In the final sentence,

the one of a kind

suggests constant change

for static is boring.

Static disagree with Smile.

Author's Note

wondering what will you get from here

Reviews

[KillCam]

Great to see a nice poem, not just a piece of fiction writing.

[FlatLineBeauty]

It's beautiful to see things through your eyes, but you see with your heart as well. Xo Winter

[LalaLuciegirl]

So Isus You have great heart and I see amazing potential. Don't take this as me being snooty because I have the same problem but try really hard to make sure you are spelling things right, or that the words are in the right tense. Other wise the reader can lose the focus of the actual meaning of your poem by the distraction of deciphering the words. Other wise I really enjoy reading your poems!
True till the day i die,
Lucy Girl

[isus]

i was always lame at grammar, but i'm working on it :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

There you go with that beautiful poetic soul of yours... I love how you create such an atmosphere to your writing, filled with deep introspection. Another wonderful write, Z :D

[Created to Write]

Whoa. That's really deep.

[I Am Svetlana]

Hm, what I got from this? I read it a couple times over and basically saw the image of a man going through his day, then going to bed, then waking up again to do the same thing, but with a different attitude. He chooses a more positive attitude and finally opens his eyes to what life really could be, beautiful! You wrote that 'creation is flawless" and that it surely is! There is no limit to our creativity and what limits we should take it.

[isus]

nice interpretation, love it :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Thanks, I kind of was afraid to say it since I thought it may have been too simple of one :/ But I'm glad you love it!

[Sami Khalil]

Very interesting read and write...Bravo........................

[isus]

thank you

[Sami Khalil]

:)..................................

[RichGee]

Good read my friend...you have your own genuine style.

[isus]

well thank you, i'm glad you see something there :)

[RichGee]

Definately

[RichGee]

Definitely

[Gilda]

Wonderful poem, and I think a lot of people could relate to it. For me it has the feeling of not knowing which the right decision is, and wanting to do something rather than standing still.

Awake again in morning,
didn't slept last night,
despite expectations smoking 'nother joint,
days of losing mind in haze (have come).

This bit here feels like someone lost in life or stuck in a rut, or someone who's realised they haven't gotten where they expected to be. Like one of those days you wake up and think you'd like to do something new in life.

Very thought provoking poem :)

[isus]

thanx for reading, flad you find it good :)

[Vria P Crow]

"From me to you" directly communicates with the reader as a letter of sorts. "Panoramic" suggests an omnipotent spectator. The speaker appears to be pondering about human nature over a joint. The third stanza made me chuckle because many can relate to "high" discussions. The ultimate questions commonly surface when weed is involved. I call it the "Artist's Food" since the plant stimulates creativity. The sleepless nights described in the poem gave me a sense of paranoia. At this stage, I imagine the writer was feeling uneasy with their thoughts into what could be a "bad hit." The third stanza describes the poet's strategy to calm them, and thereby, letting the flow of thoughts collect in a cohesive manner.

The core theme of "From me to you" presents itself in the last stanza: "Static is boring." The poet recognizes the beauty of every human being. We are split versions of "perception" which personifies the writer's reference to "New". We are creations yet we are creators. It is a wonderful contradiction.

Beautiful work, isus!

[isus]

You do such deep and comprehensive reviews and i feel i dont deserve it in any way, if you ever read baudelaire or rimbaud you would know i really dont deserve it :)

[Vria P Crow]

Haha, I think you are too modest. We are all human beings including Baudelaire and Rimbaud. I believe our thoughts often mirror successful artists; it keeps us connected.

Haha, I suppose the English major in me likes to dissect everything. :D Furthermore, I have simply come to enjoy your poetry as you well do deserve to be heard.